I grew up around firearms, so I am (for the most part) comfortable with them. My parents became gun safety instructors when I was in my sullen teenhood, and I remember (sometimes not so fondly) weekends spent on the gun range, writing and reading and drawing while they helped students shoot a variety and sundry of rifles and handguns, all the while trying not to freeze in the bitter Colorado winters.
I went through the safety class myself, and got to shoot all those pretty guns. Occasionally we’d go to the range, too, and I’d use the tiny gun I always think of as being pearl-handled, though I’m not totally sure it was. It’s romantic, though: a pearl-handled .22 revolver, just the right size for a garter holster.
That gun needs to go in a story.
This weekend, my trigger-happy tendencies were reignited. Mr. Eliza and I spent Sunday morning at a local range, shooting rifles and handguns of multiple calibers and awesomeness. You can check out a video of our date at his blog, here.
When we first got into the shooting part of the range (which was frigid, by the way), my nose flared up with the familiar scent of a fired weapon. What is that smell, technically? Gunpowder? Google says its cordite. Whatever it is, it smelled a little like coming home.
Then I got my first rifle to shoot, a .22, and sadness ensued. When you have a gun that weighs as much as a rifle, all the recoil from such a tiny bullet is going to be absorbed. It felt like shooting a capgun. Pingpingping. I used my next round of ammo on something much beefier, which you can see in the video. I think it was a 9mm, all black, with stuff on top and an effing laser sight. Heavy, too, and powerful. This, I thought, was much more what a rifle experience should be.
Then we moved on to handguns, where I started out with a Ruger Mark something, a .22. I have a thing for Ruger Marks. They remind me of WWII. Very no-nonsense guns, in my opinion. I don’t know if he actually used this gun, but I imagine Michael Fassbender wielding a Ruger Mark III in Inglourious Basterds. And how is that ever not sexy?
Anyway, after being bitch-slapped by a 9 mm Colt and wooed by a 9 mm Smith and Wesson, among others, we ended our time at the range and went out for beer.
So, why am I telling you all this? Well, other than the fact that I had an awesome time, and that I fully endorse gun safety training for everyone (seriously, do you want to be stuck not knowing up come the zombie apocalypse? Think long-term people.), I think that is important as writers to get a good grip (harhar) on some technical elements of writing. And for me, and a LOT of writers I know, guns are part of the story.
And when gun are part of the story, chances are you’re writing a high tension scene, one you want your reader to really identify with.
One way to achieve that connection is by getting the description right. The weight of the gun, the kick of the recoil (or lack of one in the case of that rifle), the smell, the imprints the grip leaves on the hand (in the case of the Colt), etc. It’s all part of it and, I think, an important part. If a character is going to kill someone, or even threaten them, their senses will be heightened. Adrenaline rushes, focus narrows, heart races.
I could write a scene where my character goes water-skiing. I could write that scene better if I went water-skiing myself.
I could write a scene where my character gets a tattoo. And, having gotten one, I think I can write it better now than I could ten years ago. (um, for a lot of reasons.)
I could write a scene where my character has sex, and—well, you get the picture.
(Not that picture. Get your head out of the gutter.)
So, what have your characters been getting up to lately? Feeling the need for any first hand research?
Photo used under Creative Commons license from Rob Beyer










