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Steampunk X Installment 2.2 (a wee smidgen late)

Before I post the next bit of a X, I feel I must express a bit of nervous frustration. Last week, Joni Labaqui, organizer for Writers of the Future, posted the first round of honorable mentions for last quarter. My name wasn’t on the list, but as I said, it was only the first. Since then, there have been no updates, no letters in the mail, no glorious phone calls. Ack! I just want to know! Every trip to the mail box is full of hope and disappointment, every time I check my blog feed my heart skips a couple beats. Ah, tension. This is what great stories are made of, right?

Also- I forgot to post my NPI update yesterday, for many reasons, including that my husband had a weird reaction to his medication. I wrote, though! And for me, that’s what really, really matters. Still, I haven’t dropped out yet. I think. I haven’t written yet today, so the verdict is still a bit up in the air.

On with the show!

Beauty isn’t the word Caedin would have used to describe her uncle’s home. Quaint, maybe. Or charming, if she stretched her definitions a bit. Eccentric. Yes, that was the word for it. Lisney Manor was a prime example of eccentricities.

Solid stone steps led up to the manor’s double doors, both of which were closed fast against the cold. Someone had hung wreaths upon the doors in anticipation of the coming holiday. Set in the center of each wreath was a stuffed bird, one grey, one blue. Both tilted in an odd fashion, as if caught in mid-jump, ready to fly. Or commit suicide.

Shutters were drawn over the many windows on the front of the house. Blue shutters and red shutters and faded yellow shutters, not pair quite alike in color. A few hung from one hinge, listing slightly, held up by it’s twin shutter. Spring would come, and at least a handful of them would come toppling down when they were drawn. Caedin glared at them. She loved the sun, and could scarcely imagine keeping the shades drawn through the winter, much less into the warmer months.

A tall spire sprouted from the rear of the house, crafted of the same stone as the front steps, though the rest of the house was made of wood. A faint green light pulsed between the cracks in the shutters there, so slight it might have been her imagination, if she were prone to imagining such things. She turned to her uncle to ask him about it, but he was already to the door, hauling her second largest bag. Mr. Bradley trotted up the steps behind him, with her remaining luggage. Lady Cheswick, of course, had remained in the carriage, giving Caedin a final farewell and entreating her to visit before pulling the door shut against the wind.

Caedin followed the men into the house, wrapping her arms against the fierce wind that had sharpened during the ride. Tiny flakes of snow appeared in the air, little bits of ice that clung to her hair and shoulders. She closed her eyes and ducked inside, pulling the door behind after her.

They stood in a cramped foyer, a bench to the right covered in stacks of paper and books. Caedin glanced at the literature; just a few dusty tomes with odd symbols inscribed on their covers. She’d heard her parents talk about uncle Alexander’s odd tastes, usually in hushed tones later in the evening, when tiredness and a bit of brandy got her parents warm and talkative. Caedin would sit on the stairs and listen to them talk, just lovers, not parents in the middle of the night. Now, Caedin wondered how happy her parents would be to know she was living with this strange man, and his unsavory entertainments.

“She’ll be fine. She has the heat, and her notes to entertain her.” Mr. Bradley was saying. Lisney frowned, a definite wrinkle forming between his heavy eyebrows.

“I can’t bear the thought of Lady Cheswick left to her own devices for too long, stuck in the carriage like that.” He took a step away from Mr. Bradley and glanced at the door that led further into the house. “Perhaps you’ll return…you’ll both return, when Caedin has had a chance to get acquainted with the old place.”

“Well…” Mr. Bradley walked over to Caedin and lifted her chin with one, strong finger. She felt her pulse quicken as his breath heated her face. He smelled of oranges and sugar, and something sharp beneath. He smiled, like he could feel her rushing blood, and released her. “You have the right idea, Lisney.”

“Good, good…” Lisney placed his hand on Mr. Bradley’s upper arm. It looked small and frail against the younger man’s strength. “I’ll see about Sunday night. An early dinner?”

Mr. Bradley nodded, wished them both farewell, and left in a whirl of icy wind. Caedin held her breath until the sound of his horses had faded, then turned to look at Lisney, who stood by, his face purple. She laughed—she couldn’t help it! He’d been holding his breath, too, clinging to the last noises of departure, and he looked like a drowning toad. Startled, Lisney coughed, his hands twitching around his face.

 
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Posted by on March 20, 2010 in Steampunk X

 

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Steampunk X Inst. 2.1 & NPI Worcount update

We shall dispatch with the NPI update first and foremost- 299 words, and more proof as to why I am participating in NPI. Had it not been for the accountability, my long day at work would have made me very reluctant to get any writing done. Maybe I’m just lazy. Blah.

And! The next installment in the Caedin Pettigrew files. This is now scene 2, and thusly indicated as installment 2.1. Enjoy!

In Mr. Bradley’s carriage, they made good time the rest of the way to the manor. Lady Cheswick proved to be too much of a conversationalist to give Caedin much time to brood upon the dismal surroundings much.

“What will you be doing while you’re here in New Haven?” Lady Cheswick asked, leaning forward in her seat.

“My uncle arranged some kind of tutor or me, though I doubt I’ll find much use for them. I was at the top of my class before—well, back home.” Caedin said. Lady Cheswick arched one perfect black eyebrow.

“Is that so? Then surely you’ll have to find some way to engage your time. Have you any hobbies?”

“Such as knitting or baking or writing long letters to my distant relatives?” Caedin shifted her weight. This woman’s hobbies likely consisted of something along those lines; nothing too strenuous or mentally taxing.

“Those sound like…” Lady Cheswick’s mouth twitched, and she touched her fingers to her lips. “Well, like very engaging pastimes.”

“I don’t— I mean those aren’t—”

“It just seems like a girl of your age and…mental capacity might find something a bit more active. But, I suppose back home you were far too busy with your studies to allow for any more taxing subscriptions.” She leaned back and studied her hands, spread in her lap. “A shame. I have been looking for an assistant.” She shrugged and smiled at Caedin. “I may resort to placing an advertisement for interested parties.”

“I don’t knit!” Caedin pushed her heels under the bench. “And I don’t know any distant relatives who would care to hear a word from me. What kind of work do you do, Lady?” Likely, she acts as treasurer for the local woman’s society, or something equally as droll. Still, that might be better than haunting Lisney Manor all day.

“No relatives at all?” Lady Cheswick shook her head, then pursed her lips, as if remembering something. “I own an apothecary. Do you know what an apothecary is?”

“You…umm…” The word sounded distantly familiar, yet exotic. It carried with it a tinge of all the dangers her parents, in their wisdom, protected her from.

“Herbs, my dear. Tinctures and salves and teas and the like.” She reached into a small bag, attached to her hip by a thin, gold cord. She withdrew a small brown vial and held it out. “Take it.” She said, when Caedin merely stared at the bottle, hanging between them. Caedin plucked it out of Lady Cheswick’s fingers and held it away from her body.

“What is it?”

“A calming tincture. There isn’t much left, I’m afraid. I used most of it on my recent trip. You may find it useful as you adjust to your new surroundings. Given the…circumstances, one would understand that you might be somewhat unsettled.” Lady Cheswick withdrew a white kerchief from the same bag. “A few drops on this, then hold it to your face, like so.” She covered her mouth and nose with the kerchief for a moment. “A few deep breaths is all it takes.”

As Lady Cheswick attempted to hand the kerchief to Caedin, the younger woman shoved the bottle back at its owner.

“I don’t need your drugs, Lady, or your pity.” Caedin felt her cheeks grow hot, and the heated air in the carriage became suddenly thick. “I will find my way quite well, I assure you, without the help of tricks or wanton engagements.”

She expected Lady Cheswick to grow angry, to curse her or throw her out of the carriage. But she did not. She dropped the kerchief in Caedin’s lap and leaned back, not accepting the bottle. She wore a funny little smile on her face, and crossed her arms over her chest. It made her look a little boyish, in contrast to the sumptuous pink silks of her dress, and her tumbling black curls.

“I had almost forgotten.” She said, narrowing her eyes at Caedin, though not in an unfriendly way.

Caedin sniffed. “Forgotten what?”

“Hmm…Put that away, we’ve arrived.”

Caedin did as she was told, vowing to foist the bottle off on some morally suspect housemaid, of which she was sure her uncle employed many.

“Forgotten what?” Caedin repeated as the carriage slowed to a stop.” Lady Cheswick’s smile twitched.

“Your parents.” She said. “I’d almost forgotten who they were.”

The door swung open. Mr. Bradley grinned.

“Welcome home.” He stepped aside and gestured wide with his arm. “Isn’t she a beauty?”

 
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Posted by on March 12, 2010 in novel push initiative, Steampunk X

 

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Steampunk X Installment 1.4

Aaaaand! Next installment…so sleepy…

“Lady Cheswick!” Lisney’s face split into a grin as he elbowed his way past Caedin. He stopped at the door and inclined his head. “It’s so lovely to see you. I had not idea you were back in New Haven.”

Lady Cheswick held her hand out to Lisney for a kiss, and returned his smile. A small dimple formed in her left cheek.

“Alexander, please, so formal?” She looked over his shoulder, and her dark eyes warmed upon seeing Caedin. She leaned out of the carriage a bit. “ I see your ward has arrived. Welcome to New Haven, my dear.”

“How did you–?” Liseny dropped her hand.

“I know everything.” She waved her gloved hand at Caedin, beckoning her closer. “I’m afraid I can’t come out to properly greet you. I sustained a small injury while I was in—while I was away.”

Lisney’s mouth dropped open, and he began sputtering worried noises. Lady Cheswick hushed him with a delicate laugh, saying: “It’s nothing more than a tender ankle. Now, are you going to introduce me to this young lady or will I be forced to introduce myself? Devon,” She jerked her head at Mr. Bradley, “Seems to have forgotten his sense of civility.”

“Of course,” Lisney’s face grew redder, his cheeks already rosy from the chill. He grabbed Caedin’s shoulder and pulled her forward. “Lady Eleanor Cheswick, allow me to introduce my niece, Miss Caedin Pettigrew, formerly of Pettigrew Hall.”

A flicker of something—sadness? Anxiety?—passed over Eleanor’s face. Just a quick tightening of her lips, a little flutter of her eyes, and it was gone.

“I’m so glad you came.” Her eyes moved to Mr. Bradley, then to Lisney. “It looks like we’re ready. Please, Caedin, sit next to me, and we may gossip like cackling hens all the way to your new home.”

“In that case, I think I’ll ride up front.” Mr. Bradley handed Caedin her last piece of luggage, a bulky red carpetbag. “Join me, Alex?”

“Alexander…” Lisney mumbled.

Caedin hid her smile, and climbed into the carriage.

 
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Posted by on March 5, 2010 in Steampunk X, Uncategorized

 

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Steampunk X, Installment 1.3

Hello, hello, and welcome back to the latest installment of the ubiquitous, the unadulterated, the ultraviolet world of Steampunk X. Where wonders never cease, and pretty young girls get into more trouble than their fragile hearts can stand.

As always, questions and comments are welcome and encouraged. Step right up, folks, don’t be shy, and listen to my tale…

Unperturbed by Lisney’s rude behavior, Caedin pushed the door open once again and stepped out. The other carriage had stopped half a dozen yards from the mangled horse. Lisney stood beside it, speaking to the person or people inside, and paid her no mind as she sank her boots into the slightly soggy ground. She could hear his voice, thin with agitation, but not his words.

She walked closer, admiring the horses on this other carriage. Newer models than Lisney’s, the horses looked to be accentuated with bits of gold. They made very little noise, only the faint hiss of their steam audible above the clanking and grinding of Lisney’s pair. The carriage itself looked new and clean, crafted from a sturdy, dust-colored cloth. A small chimney sprouted out of the back, declaring to all the world that it’s owner had opted for a heated ride. It meant a greater initial investment, Caedin knew, as well as frequent visits from a tinkerer to ensure that passengers did not get burned by malfunctioning parts.

Lisney stood behind the open carriage door, still oblivious to her nearness. She could hear them, now, Lisney’s voice already growing familiar, and another man’s voice, rich and warm.

“Over the hill.” Lisney said, pointing down the road in the direction they’d been heading. “A trip I dare not make on foot with my current companion.”

“Yes, I should say not. You’re prepared to leave your ride on the side of the road? Any passing ruffian might strip it bare of worthwhile parts.”

“I’m not worried about that. It would give me good enough reason to draw up a contract for a new fleet. Maybe something closer to your own.” Lisney made a noise that sounded like a cross between a wheeze and a cough.

After a moment, Caedin realized he was laughing. She sucked in a bracing lungful of air.

“It would be so nice to have the opportunity to ride in such an outfit, of course. Without a proper sampling of the wares, I might be further convinced…” Caedin saw Lisney’s fingers stroke the side of the door.

“Lisney,” The man said. “You seem to think it necessary to dangle the promise of work in front of me. And all for something any kind man might readily agree to.”

“Oh, I didn’t—” Lisney took a step back, out of the cover of the door. He glanced over and saw her standing there, and for a second she saw a flash of brilliant rage on his sallow face. In the next instant, it was gone. He held his hand out to her, a positively genteel smile gracing his lips. A smile that didn’t reach his eyes. Not even close.

“Mr. Bradley, might I present my niece, Miss Caedin Paettigrew.” Lisney said, his fingers wiggling as he inclined his head. She ignored his hand and stepped past him in order to get a good look at the friendly gentleman in the expensive carriage. Her breath caught in her throat, and it was all she could do to stammer out a greeting.

“H-how do you do, Mr. Bradley.” She curtsied, unable to tear her eyes from him.

His frame took up the breadth of the door, wide shoulders wrapped in soft blue corduroy, a crisp white shirt and patterned vest straining over his chest. He wore his chestnut hair long and free, so that it flowed over his shoulders like so much water. His skin was the color of milky caramel, and looked just as sweet, save for the dark stubble gracing his chin. Soft, blue-green eyes studied her with an intensity that made her blush.

“Your uncle tells me you’re in a bit of a bind.” He said, smiling with only one side of his mouth.

“The horses.” She managed to say.

“Yes, the horses.” Mr. Bradley looked at Lisney, then back at her. “Well, I suppose we’d better get your things loaded up and be on our way. I don’t like tarrying in the middle of the road.”

He stepped into the little space between Caedin and the carriage, allowing her to see how big he truly was. He towered more than a foot above her, with arms were as wide around as her thighs. All muscle, judging by the way he carried himself.

She didn’t think to move away, though he stood only inches away, until Mr. Bradley began to laugh. The sound trickled into her ears and tickled the butterflies in her stomach that had lain cold and dormant since her parent’s death. It was this that made her realize just how close he stood, and her manners caught up all at once. She ordered her feet to move backward, on the double.

They obeyed, but only just. The heel of her left shoe snagged on her inner petticoat, the muddy earth slipped beneath her other foot, and she was suddenly falling, arms flapping uselessly through the air. The sensation lasted only a second. Mr. Bradley’s strong arm looped beneath her back, and her hands found purchase on his overcoat. He propped her back on her feet and released her.

It was all over in an instant, yet his scent, sweat and smoke and leather, clung to her. She shivered, partially due to the cold.

“A delicate woman like you needs to be careful.” He said. “One wrong tumble and you could break something irreplaceable.”

She wanted to tell them that as long as he was around to catch her, she’d be safe, but he was already turning away, looking back into the carriage.

“Darling,” He said, and one of her butterflies died. “I won’t be but a minute.”

A woman’s face peered around the frame of the door, a study in cream and ebony and crimson. Caedin felt the rest of her butterflies fall into the bottom of her gut, a sick and heavy weight.

 
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Posted by on February 26, 2010 in Steampunk X

 

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Steampunk X, Installment 1.2

Back again, I see! Henceforth, additions to this story will be labeled as follows: Chapter One, Installment One (Last week’s tidbit) = Installment 1.1. This week = 1.2. When I begin a new chapter, it will become 2.1, 2.2 and so and so on. Now without further ado, the ongoing and newly begun saga of Miss Caedin Pettigrew:

The road to Lisney manor had been treated poorly by the winter. The dirt was rutted with the tracks of carriages, holes formed by ice and sludge making the way difficult, even for the brass horses. Travel was slow, and Caedin took the opportunity to examine the scenery. It seemed, to her a better option than struggling for conversation with Lisney himself, who had braced himself in the corner of the bench across from her, arms folded stiffly over his chest.

Unfortunately, the world beyond the carriage was as lackluster as her company. Thin trees bordered the road, with branches that reached desperately into the sky, searching for the sunlight they got so little of. Gray clouds hung close to the land, letting through only the weakest intimation of sunlight. They passed some meadows, full of brown grass tipped with frost. Just looking at the barren scape made Caedin shiver. She tugged her jacket closer around her chest and set her jaw against the cold. It wouldn’t do to show Lisney weakness so early in their relationship. Or ever, judging by his own tightly pursed lips and distant gaze.

Caedin was about to ask Lisney how much father they had to travel before the manor, having been in the carriage already for what seemed an egregiously long time, when the sound of scraping metal cut through her thoughts. The carriage shuddered and came to a stop as a loud clanking came from ahead of them. Caedin opened the door, eager to be out of must and into the fresh air, though the weather was frigid. Lisney slapped her hand away from the handle.

“Stay here.” He said, already moving through the door on the other side. He moved with a grudging speed, punctuated by little sighs and grunts, a constant sneer on his face. She let the door bang shut before opening her side and sticking her face out. Cold air swept across her cheeks and filled the carriage with the scent of metal and frozen nature. She stepped onto the step outside the door and peered at the problem.

One of the horses had taken a bad step. Or failed due to faulty upkeep, Caedin thought. Either way, the horses leg was twisted beneath it, and Lisney stood next to it, glaring at the broken machinery. He poked it with his foot, made a noise, then looked up and around, eyes alighting on Caedin’s face. His look of irritation intensified, and he flapped his hand at her, hurrying around to her side.

“Back in, foolish girl You’ll catch your death out here.”

“It’s not so bad.” She said, already shrinking away from him. He shook his head and pushed on the door, trying to shut it even as she moved back into the carriage.

“Not worth the risk.” He said, but it seemed he was speaking more to himself than to her. At that moment, they both turned their heads toward the road, hearing another carriage approaching along the same treacherous trail. He pushed her inside with a final reprimand, and went to greet the traveler.

 
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Posted by on February 19, 2010 in Steampunk X

 

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Steampunk X: Part the First

Greetings! And welcome to the first installment of an ongoing story, courtesy of the internets and EA Hisrch. The tentative, working, malleable and altogether transitory title of this work is Steampunk X. This will be replaced as soon as, or before, I have something less flagrant. Enjoy! And feel free to leave any and all comments below.

A knot grew in Caedin Pettigrew’s stomach as she watched the train pull away from Rasmussen Station, steam billowing in the bitter cold air. Her eyes were dry, but her heart felt like a drop of lead in her chest. She fingered a white handkerchief , tucked in the front pocket of her vest. Her skin stuck to a blot of waxy residue in one corner, cherry red lipstick stained in the fabric. Her hair, swept into a mass of curls on the top of her head, began to come loose in the winter wind. She shivered, and closed her eyes; the scent of oil and old wood and ice surrounded her. She heard footsteps on the boards and turned to see Alexander Lisney, her new caretaker.

“Miss Pettigrew?” He extended his hand to her and bent slightly at the waist, never quite meeting her eyes. She took his hand and squeezed. Bones moved like cold fluid beneath his soft skin. She let go as quickly as courtesy allowed.

“Nice to meet you.” The words flowed from her mouth in contradiction to her feelings. This man, in his tight black mourning coat, his heavy lidded eyes and painfully jutting bones, did not look like someone she would ever want to meet. Her circumstances made their acquaintance even less appealing. Judging from the way he was looking at her now, his lip curling almost imperceptibly, he wasn’t very excited either.

“I’m sure you will have plenty of opportunity in the future to examine the eccentricities of this station.”  He picked up her satchel and started toward his carriage, drawn by two clanking brass horses. “I’ve interrupted an important meeting to come fetch you.”

The knot tightened, even as an apology bubbled unbidden to her lips. He moved quickly, however, and stole her chance. Lisney walked with an odd jerking motion that belied his mechanical leg. She’d been warned by her parent’s lawyer that it was best not to stare at the man’s gait, as he was a bit sensitive over his infirmity. The war had taken everything below his left hip, and modern science had replaced it with gadgetry and brass bolts.

Caedin cast one last look at the tracks, then hurried to catch up with Alexander. As she drew near, she could hear the hiss and grind of his leg working, though the voices of her fellow travelers rose up around them. She shivered, thinking of that sound amplified in the quiet hallways of the Lisney Manor. She would invest in balls of wax to wear, or giant rabbit fur earmuffs. The image of herself in a pair of such earmuffs made her smile ever so briefly. The sight of his carriage, however, stole any shred of joy she managed to entertain, even in passing.

The carriage itself was crafted of a stiff black canvas, faded and weathered and creaking with age. Patches, in varying shades of gray, decorated the side of the carriage, covering most of the holes. His horses dripped thick black oil onto the cobblestone streak. The oil mixed with the melting snow, drawing a snaky rainbow away from the carriage and into the gutter. Caedin wanted to catch the filmy colors in her fingers, keep them from getting lost in the sewers of New Haven. She reached into her pocket, instead, and touched the kerchief before climbing into the musty hold.

 
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Posted by on February 12, 2010 in Steampunk X

 

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