What is it about great big goals and getting sick that make them so compatible? Is it the added stress one takes on? Or perhaps a little kick in the butt to remind one to be humble? Either way, I’m kind of tired of it.
Around the end of week one of my ClarionWest expedition I got super sick. (Too sick to be as nice and charming around Connie Willis and Neil Gaiman as I wanted to be. *pout*) I was tired out from not getting enough sleep, drained from being apart from my home and thrown into this new environment, and probably reaping all the combined stress that I’d been carrying around ever since…well, since I sent my application, actually.
Now, here we are at the end of week one of 2011 NaNoWriMo and I’m sick. Not as bad as that CW experience, but then the circumstances aren’t as extreme, either. (Plus, I don’t think I’m as sick as I’m going to get, so there is still time!) Despite the sore throat, persistent headache and weird hollow feeling in the back of my neck, though, I am still on track to hit my self-imposed NaNo goal. And with one hundred words to spare!
You hear a lot about week two in the NaNo community. There’s this kind of dreadful, dark cloud that hangs over everything. This is the point where the honeymoon generally comes to an end. Characters who were at one point exciting and new become boring and predictable. Settings that once shined with an exotic glamour become trite and dull. Plots that were as twisty as a sailor’s knot look more like flat rope. This, they say, is where it starts to get hard.
And, while I think there’s certainly some truth to that (oh, stupid, stupid mental institute scene), I think the opposite can happen, too. This is where you start really getting to know your characters. Quirks emerge that you couldn’t have planned on. They turn a phrase that is so perfect it seems kind of amazing that you wrote it. This is when you can see that your knotty plot really was a bit flat–and how to fix it. The moments that start happening in week two are kind of magical, but its magic that has come from planting all those lovely little plot and character and setting seeds, and then weeding and tending them so you can watch something green pop through your word dirt.
Then, in December, or January, or twenty years from now, you can come back, brush off the dirt, and keep all those lovely verdigris pieces that were so painful to find amidst the dull, the predictable, and the annoying.
What I’m trying to say here is that week two doesn’t have to be horrible. Once I started giving my story some rope to wander off on, it started pulling me along right behind it. Cut your characters some slack. Throw them into a hard situation. Now is the time to break out the pressure cooker and watch them sweat. Because as we all know, sweaty people are major-interesting!
No…wait…what I mean is: Story is Conflict. Make things hard, and I’m willing to bet they’ll be fun.
Also, if you’re starting to feel sick, take some vitamins and a day off. In the long run, it’ll be worth it.
Current Daily Word Count: 3,263
Current Total Word Count: 22,505
Excerpt from today’s writing:
“Need a hand?” He called out when she saw him. He had a wide, even stride, dark blonde hair, and looked to be about Mom’s age. Sydney was about to tell him to piss off when Mom got out of the car. She was smiling, and she’d wiped the trails of mascara off her cheeks.
“It won’t start,” Mom said as the guy got closer.
“Maybe I can help,” he said, returning her smile with a flash of his own pearly whites. Sydney had the feeling they were in the start of a bad horror movie. Broken down car, outside of a mental institute, some strange man offering to help. Next thing, he’d be drugging Mom and chasing Bryan down with a chainsaw. Sydney, of course, would be the brave heroine who escapes the madman in order to alert the police, only to be stalked by him—and the memories or her poor, slain family—through the rest of the movie.
Sydney gave the guy her best polite smile and moved out of the way so he could join Bryan under the hood.






